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New Life: Begins

Kinda short, but really good!
MindzEye
MindzEye
I didn't want to seem like it was dragging. I figured the perspective's perception would seem the scene to be faster than it was. ^~^
Holy cow! Immediately intense beginning that immediatly has me wanting to read more. Can't wait to see the next chapter!
MindzEye
MindzEye
I'm having a tug-of-war with the grammar of the next chapter, but it's coming along ok.

Glad to have ya aboard. ^~^
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